Final Magazine

This is my final submission for my magazine cover, contents and my double page spread.

MAGAZINE COVER PAGE

MAGAZINE CONTENTS PAGE

 

MAGAZINE DOUBLE PAGE SPREAD

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Critical self reflection component 1

 This is my critical self reflection for my magazine project

Critical Self Reflection- Comp 1, Bagus 11B by Bagus Ganteng ehehehehe

Double page spread research and development

This is a couple of examples and screenshots that I have compiled on double page spreads in sports magazines, particularly basketball magazines.

REFLECTION

This is the worst part of all 3 parts of the magazine that I had to do, this is due to the fact that I have zero sense of design and creativity with the added fact that I have either 2 tests a week (probably on my time management). We had a whole term which did not feel enough due to the fact that there were other classwork, basketball practice and other events that I have to attend, which makes dividing time very hard. The only times that I had to do this was in the 6 hours of media studies we have every week, which I think is very not enough. In short, designing this was hell because of my sense of design.

This magazine on top I also found from someone also doing media studies from 2013, I admit this is not quite what I like as it does not really give enough space for the words. And I am not using only 2 pictures like in this picture.

In my project, I will design my double page spread like this (magazine on top), this will be my first option in making my double page spread, with the images horizontally lined up in the upper parts of the page, with the words on the bottom with the addition of small subheadings before every text.

This magazine on top is not quite clear as I screenshotted it from a youtube video, but as I said, I would not use this due to the fact that I am using 4 pictures

This magazine on top was my inspiration for setting one theme or colour for the background.

This magazine double page spread on top inspired me that I can go simple with the magazine background, with this magazine going for an all Black

EXTRA ANALYSIS:

out of all these screenshots I took from youtube videos reviewing a basketball magazine called SLAM (I do not have it, it is unaivailable in Indonesia) I have took one thing, and it is the fact that they dominantly put bigger pictures but still have a lot of words on their articles.

These are all of my experiments with various styles of double page spread designs from this research that I have done.

As I said, due to the fact that I have 4 pictures, I decided to be inspired by the 2nd picture, I decided to use white as a base to see which colours fit my double page spread, here in this whole design, I have decided to confrom to the last picture on my research. As they used simple colour backgrounds to lay out the double page spread, here, it is still very messed up as its still some kind of rough work to see how it would turn out, the margins and the organisations were all over the place.

On this picture on top, I decided to experiment with blue, before this change, I also asked my teacher whether it was neat or not, turns out, the margins and borders were still everywhere, I was not following them, there were too many rows and columns, plus the fact that one was 1cm and another was 2cms, which made the words go out of place in the first one.

Here on the picture on top, I have decided to experiment with yellow, I also decided to add subheadings so the readers would know which shoes that are on the pictures on top, I decided to use the famously sporty Racing Sans as a main font for my heading and subheading. Now everything looks way more presentable, as according still to the conventions of my research (plain background layout, pictures still stand out)

On this picture on top, I have asked my friends about their opinion on my double page spread, they said that my heading looked too plain, they gave me an idea to make the heading yellow. It looks way better, this also conforms to my colours and themes of my magazine.

I asked another friend, he told me to make the background colour a bit darker blue in order to not make the background really stand out (I hope you see the difference). I have also adjusted the word placement on the magazine in order to match the borders. Something still looks off, which is the page number, way too bottom.

After another opinion session with my friends, I think this would be my final submission, I have made the rating or Vandys verdict into a bigger size font in order for the readers to be able to view it.

*****CHANGE OF PLANS******

I felt like the previous, "final design" was not good enough as I had in inner feeling that it does not really look like a magazine.

I shifted the colour to white, which still conforms with the simplicty of background colours in a basketball magazine (research). Right now, it really looks like a mess as its all far apart, no organization at all of the page, and the unreadable words.

After asking for feedback from my teacher and my friends, they decided that It would be best for me to put the title of the article in the MIDDLE of the page instead of top right/left. This subverts typical magazine conventions, but not basketball magazine conventions. (In the research, some basketball/sports magazine took their title cover to the middle in order to focus more on the subject and topic itself. In my case, I just wanted to make my magazine unique and one of a kind, a new type of design for basketball magazines.

I also reduced the amount of words to make the article readable and accessible to the eyes of the reader, added new text boxes for, " Vandy's Verdict" in order to align it with each other from the other sides.

Therefore, this would be my final result, I am very satisfied with the improvement. I feel very good about this part.

Contents page research development

 This is my contents page development.

These are some images of examples of contents page based on my genre (sports, basketball magazines)

REFLECTION:

This is the second worst thing that I have to deal with out of the whole 3 projects that I have to do, this is as usual, due to my bad sense of creativity and design, I always had to ask my friends or my teacher for help. Every time I present my friends with a new design, most likely they would dismiss it. Another thing that makes this an absolute pain is I already worked hard enough on one design just to find out its just not it. So I had to change to another picture and another inspiration last minute on deadline week in order to somehow try to boost my grades up. I have learned to read magazines more frequently next time and try to fit in atleast 30 minutes of time every day on the next media project (I hope there is no more).

These are some contents page ideas that i sketched manually 

Slam

Out of all the screenshots I took from the internet, I have took one thing, and that is the fact that contents pages in sports magazines, particularly basketball magazines, have a tendency to show more of the athlete in question in the magazine, with smaller words but still visible to point out the main points that are being shown.

Here, I started with a picture, and experimented a font called Shrikhand, it does not look good at all in my opinion as the words are not quite visible due to the backround.

So I decided to revert to a blue colour on the font, which was a very stupid idea, as it made everything darker and the background was pretty much dark as well. Making the words not visible.

I asked my teacher how he felt about the presentation of this contents page alongside its themes and topics, in order to make the words clear, he gave me a suggestion to cover a part of the page with a shape of any colour in order to make the words visible.

Here on this picture on top, I changed the heading's font, into a more casual nature, while making my shape yellow, and making my words white in order to just test out which type of colours.

On this picture on top, I have asked for opinions from my friends, they adviced me to change the opacity of the coloured shape that covers my words, I think it looks better as the bright colour of yellow does not outshine the words. I also made the font Racing Sans in order to match the sporty vibe.

On this picture on top, One of my friends also suggested for me to play around with the gradient of the coloured shape, here, it makes the magazine look way more casual. 

EMERGENCY ADJUSTMENT

I think it kind of looks better than the previous ones, but something was still off. In my research, the ESPN magazine (2nd picture) uses small words as a short description on the articles. I also wanted to follow the convention of the cover athlete in the middle of the contents page.

So I decided to revert to this photo:

I used this photo as I am in the middle of the frame, I also used my knowledge of adding shapes in the sides of the picture as spaces to add the contents.

So now I would make this picture on top the main inspiration of my contents page. I like the simple and minimalistic nature of this contents page as it looks modern in which the younger generation likes (target audience in terms of age). The colour scheme would also be neat and simple, easy to look at and not complicated at all.

SECOND ATTEMPT WITH DIFFERENT PICTURE

In this second attempt, I started to follow the conventions of the role magazine that I just embedded on top, I put a heading and subheading, with the number of pages not being bolded, instead, I bolded the subheading, this is in order to conform with my inspiration, this was all over the place though, As the borders was aligning with nothing and it was all over the place.

On the screenshot on top, I decided to change to racing sans, but no matter how much I play around with the distance of the lines, It always comes off border or its either looks pretty off to me.

So on this screenshot on top, I reverted back to the font TT autonomous in order to keep the modern look.

Here, I just made my second subheading, a bit bigger, now its all done.

******CHANGE OF PLANS****

Same like the double page spread, I did not really feel good about my contents page after declaring it done, after some hours of consideration, I have decided to change my design as a whole in order to make it look good. 

Here, I decided to move my picture to the side, and add a large yellow box in the left side of the magazine, so far, I am liking the idea on how this would look, it is going to look very simple, it would conform also to the standards of my target audience, it looks way more minimalistic and neater, which aligns with the taste of teenagers nowadays.

Here I am experimenting with some combinations of big numbers, subheadings and letters, I have decided to bold the typeface Aileron as my subheading and make the typeface Norwester as my big number font, also bolding it. Bolding is connotated with masculinity, which is ideal to use in a spirts magazine regardless if it is a cover page, contents page or double page spread.

Here, I am playing around with my word placement and how to arrange it, I am doing this in order to create some unique modern design on this sports magazine in order to attract the eyes of my young audience.

This would be the final product, it certainly looks more like a magazine, more neater and better than the last one, I feel very good about this. This is good to go.

Magazine front cover layout development

This is my front cover layout magazine development.

REFLECTION:

Even though this is the easiest out of all the three pages that I have to do for this magazine, it still took me a long time and a lot of experimenting before getting the right one for me. And due to all the other amounts of work I had to do, I could not really shift my focus mainly on the cover (which is the literal image of the magazine) and I do not like to say this over and over again but the fact that I have zero designing skills makes it worse, I am not looking forward to doing this kind of project anymore.

This is my first attempt on playing around with coverlines and masthead alongside with a picture on google draw.

These are my rough sketches for my magazine cover, I haven't really chose any of them as I am still thinking about new ideas to determine which rough design is the best one.

I tried using this photo, in my opinion it is not very good as there is another person in the photo, as I wanted this magazine to be focused on only one person as the head and the soul of the magazine. 

So I decided to use this photo, it has other people of course, but the ball is in my hands (the so called celebrity in this magazine), which emphasizes that all the attention is on me shooting the ball. Even though this is a very good picture, the only problem is that my teacher (who gave me feedback) told me it does not look like I am a celebrity athlete in my own club as I am wearing a Manchester City jersey.

So I decided to revert to this picture, its all just me and the ball, the background is also neutral making me able to experiment colours of words and fonts without worrying if it can't be seen by the people reading or not. I would keep the colours of the heading white and yellow 

After I did all that, I experimented with fonts and added my main articles as coverlines while keeping my masthead with the classic canva font, I added words on both sides  in order to make the magazine look eventful

After consulting with my teacher about the design, he talked me to reducing the amount of words and changing the fonts, so I decided to only put the shoe names (to support my main article that will be in the double page spread). And remove entirely whatever is in the right side of my magazine. After asking my friends for recommendations, they told me to add a hint of black gradient on the left side to make it visible, while making the celebrity name on the bottom go to the right side of my magazine (conforms to the genre)

So this screenshot on top is basically what happened after I lifted the words into 100, I also asked my friends and they asked me to change the font (which I did, I hope you can see the difference between the screenshot on top and the one on this). I added barcodes in order to see how it will look like.

Here, I also added the plus icon and the word more in order to conform with SLAM magazines designs as I also took it as an inspiration, my friends says it looks better as I really have totally conformed to basketball magazines in my own style of fonts and typefaces and my own articles.

After consulting with my teacher, we decided to remove the plus icon and add the editions and make the barcode smaller, this really looks neater, better and more minimalistic, which conforms to the designs of magazines directed at the younger generation.

Here, I have changed,"HoopHub Feb'24" into just Feb'24, this would conclude the last part and the final process of my cover page as a whole. I think it looks insane, it is minimallistic and the colour scheme conforms to the conventions of typical basketball magazines who allign their colours with the cover artists context/jersey.